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March 21, 2002
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that knife is great.
cute and deadly =cP
So is the piece ;/
But I like it
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Kezabelle.
Wonder who will be collecting all the noses...
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Axis000
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I also think you should consider toning down the brightness of the glare on the knife. The glare itself is fine, but the way the knife slowly gets brighter towards the tip makes the glare seem less like a glare and more like a light bulb. I think glares should be tiny but intense spots of light that don't cast light on anything else around them, because they are really only seen by the eye and the camera. If you want to make the knife look metallic, you need to add sharp contrasting strips of light instead of a gradual increasing brightness like you have now.
Her left hand is another thing that needs attention. It looks muffled and indistinct. That's why it's hard for me to determine if she is holding the knife in front of her or behind.
Those three things are relatively small critiques, because overall, I really like this piece. Everything adds to the creepy effect: the ambient red light, the red background, the expressionless face, the plain school clothes, the plain hair, the nonchalant posture, and of course her bleeding eye sockets. And I’m glad you didn’t go for the cheesy “dripping-blood-on-the-knife” effect. In fact, I find it impressive that this piece required almost no blood and gore at all (except for a little blood in the eye sockets and on the eyes) and still succeeds in giving off a creepy feel. Great work here.
pretty creepy for such a cute kid.... Good stuff!
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